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"Changes"
Doorway Flash Entry
by Tom Mason
"You're too predictable," she said. "I need some excitement in my life. Can you understand that?"
He understood now. When he thought stability, she thought boring.
He followed her to the doorway. She made one last appeal, "Aren't you even going to try and stop me?"
He looked at her with tears sliding down his face thinking, "I want to change. I don't know how."
The door shut with them on opposite sides.
He remained silent.
She knew he would.
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Kelly,
I just wanted to thank you for posting this. Much appreciated.
Tom, good emotional impact in such a brief scene! And you're very welcome and I'm glad you contributed. =D
i agree with kelly. nice emotion.
WOW..but then I knew BF was a great writer so I'm really not surprised.
Excellent! Sometimes people know each other TOO well.
Wow...Fantastic....
Excellent story!!
This is great! Just what I needed too, another blog to read. :)
Real good. Reminds me of K. Vonnegut. Real good.
This is so real I can't begin to describe. Absolutely loved it!
Hi Tom ~~ A good story in very few words. Enjoyed reading some of your previous work. Keep it up.
Cheers, Merle.
This is good.
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